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As far as loops go, I've heard worse. This has a lot of character.

Pezmobile responds:

Thx for the feedback man i really appreciate it

I loved the kick.

I loved the kick. Sounded more like a taiko drum than a kick. I also loved the pan flute.

C-Enterprise responds:

Pan flute inspired from prison break's theme ehe :D
Thanks for the review ;)

Interesting.

I like all the parts of this song, the bass motif, the drums, and the little modulated part. But you need to put them together into a song better.

kingbotina responds:

Ok ty for the comment.
Have a nice day

hmmm.

this sounds like you used some very sophisticated tools to make this sound nice and soothing, etc, but you had no real Idea how to use those tools effectively to make an actual song.

kingbotina responds:

I didn't use any tools XD
But anyway thanks.
Ok, I used a program called ableton live 0.7

Very nice

Very soothing and well played. The only critique in can give is that you need to work on getting a fuller, rounder tone recorded with that guitar.

Boux responds:

thanks! ill try.

Thank you.

Awesome Song, mediocre production. You need more presence on your vocals. Try some compression/chorus effects.

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Thanks! Though there's a shitload of compression on em, no chorus though, but yeah the vox suck in this song XD

Sorry but.

This is repetetive and unineresting. Unpleasing sound. Try again.

TheStart10101010 responds:

i would like to see you do better!

Dude..

Mad props, I believe is the proper expression. You must tell me what tools you used to craft this fine audio experience.

JeffHeim responds:

haha this "fine audio experience" was crafted using the East West Quantum Leap Symphonic Orchestras and Choirs. I use Finale 2008 which really limits what I can do with the sounds in terms of dynamics (crescendos/decrescendos), but overall I'm very happy with the quality I get from the sounds.

Welll...

Lacks any tonal structure of any kind. Lacks any memorable melody. Any meldoy it does have is random and un appealing. One thing I did like is the first few measures. I liked that drum beat. I think that could be part of a much better song.

Nashton responds:

alright cool thanks
what could i have done to build a better tonal structure within the song?

should i have just kept the melody with just on instrument instead of passing it around them?

should i just scrap it and build from that drumbeat?

sorry for all the question i just want to make it better, ya'know

you wouldn't mind listing to day 1 would you?

PM me back cool thanks again

Could be good but...

This might be the best song in the world. I'd never know it though because I can't hear it. I can't hear the voice practially at all. Don't just set up a headset mic in your basement and record one take on your computer and then post it online. It's horrible. Now, that being said, it sounds like your band is not bad at all {from what I can hear}. Good rhythm, good tuning, good singing (i think). Sadly I can't really tell. No, this recording I wouldn't even use as a demo. Keep trying though, it's easier than you might think with today's cheap technology and a little research.

PenguinTamer responds:

Yah I know the quality is very poor. Just a few more concerts and we'll have enough money for a decent PA. But this was actually filmed with a digital camera. Crappiest quality availible. I'm sorry.

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