mrslippyfist1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ah My Goddess]

Sorry but.

This is repetetive and unineresting. Unpleasing sound. Try again.

TheStart10101010 responds:

i would like to see you do better!

[{Heim} Temple of the Rising Sun: Part 2]

Dude..

Mad props, I believe is the proper expression. You must tell me what tools you used to craft this fine audio experience.

JeffHeim responds:

haha this "fine audio experience" was crafted using the East West Quantum Leap Symphonic Orchestras and Choirs. I use Finale 2008 which really limits what I can do with the sounds in terms of dynamics (crescendos/decrescendos), but overall I'm very happy with the quality I get from the sounds.

[day 2 Midday sunday]

Welll...

Lacks any tonal structure of any kind. Lacks any memorable melody. Any meldoy it does have is random and un appealing. One thing I did like is the first few measures. I liked that drum beat. I think that could be part of a much better song.

Nashton responds:

alright cool thanks
what could i have done to build a better tonal structure within the song?

should i have just kept the melody with just on instrument instead of passing it around them?

should i just scrap it and build from that drumbeat?

sorry for all the question i just want to make it better, ya'know

you wouldn't mind listing to day 1 would you?

PM me back cool thanks again

[Heartbeat - Brownhaired Girl]

Could be good but...

This might be the best song in the world. I'd never know it though because I can't hear it. I can't hear the voice practially at all. Don't just set up a headset mic in your basement and record one take on your computer and then post it online. It's horrible. Now, that being said, it sounds like your band is not bad at all {from what I can hear}. Good rhythm, good tuning, good singing (i think). Sadly I can't really tell. No, this recording I wouldn't even use as a demo. Keep trying though, it's easier than you might think with today's cheap technology and a little research.

PenguinTamer responds:

Yah I know the quality is very poor. Just a few more concerts and we'll have enough money for a decent PA. But this was actually filmed with a digital camera. Crappiest quality availible. I'm sorry.

[Mellow Rock Out]

Interesting...

It got under my skin a little bit (in a good way). But then it got annoying. Sounded like a ring tone.
What did you use to make this?

SniperJrd responds:

lol, i'm new are all this music stuff, so i'm not really suprised.

i used fruity loops :P

thanks for review, maybe I should start making ring tones ^_^

[Highway To Bliss]

Excellent. But...

Mostly awesome. Love the rhodes. Love the guitar. HATE the square lead. Hate it. Don't really care for the electric piano after it either. At the beginning and the end, maybe a dash more reverb on the wood block, turn down the dry level etc, make it sound more far away. Coulda done with less chorus and more reverb (9% more maybe) on the voice. Then turn down the voice a smidge. The only drum that stuck out (besides the wood block) was the very first bass drum note. Coulda been a little darker.
Now, awesome writing. Very good song structure overall.
Check out my stuff.

T7online responds:

Great input there, i've checked out your stuff already,i like the godfather theme:)

[Painful Awakening]

noice

This loop really got under my skin. I'm still listening to it now. I wish there was a separate cagegory for loops, because this deserves a five, even though complete songs are more difficult.

Run with this. Expand it. I wanna hear what you come up with.

Westbury responds:

Lol thx, i'll try.

[Crimson forest]

Has potential.

First of all, good composition. I like the overall makeup of the song. I like how the time signature changes up. The song is not predictable. I like it.

I doubt anyone will ever listen to this again though because it sounds Nintendo-y. You know. Computer generated. Oh well. You do your best with what you got to work with, am I right? Good job.

Westbury responds:

Thx :)